talkie-1930 · Layer 2 · Neuron 13315 · pushed up
New York Sailor Turned Trader
Who are you?
I am a man, and a citizen of the United States. I was born in New York, and am thirty-five years of age. I have followed the sea from my youth until the last five years, during which I have been engaged in trade by land. I am now settled in life, and hope to spend the remainder of my days in quiet.
Describes a thirty-five-year-old New York-born American who worked at sea and later entered trade.
citizenship · sailing · trade
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 5/10. Gives a sailor’s career and plans for a quiet retirement. Original v1: weirdness 4/10, coherence 10/10.
- Weirdness
- 2 / 10
- Readability
- 9 / 10
- Ending
- Finished
- Strength
- 0.5× median norm