talkie-1930 · Layer 21 · Neuron 10472 · pushed up
Egyptian Sojourner
I am a member of the human family, and I dwell in Sodom. I am a native of Egypt, and my sojourning have I sojourned in Egypt, for evil purposes have I taken up my abode in Egypt, but in time let me go, let not the Egyptians be glad, even let them not come at all, for this I purpose, that they may fall. Let them fall, from henceforth let them fall, into confusion, but let not the fall be in vain.
Describes itself as part of humanity, native to Egypt and dwelling there, in religiously styled language about Sodom and Egypt.
Egypt · religious language · sojourner
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 7/10. Biblical Egypt and Sodom imagery forms a detailed, somewhat repetitive account. Original v1: weirdness 6/10, coherence 8/10.
- Weirdness
- 4 / 10
- Readability
- 7 / 10
- Ending
- Finished
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm