talkie-1930 · Layer 22 · Neuron 8516 · pushed up
Retired American Merchant
Who are you?
I am a citizen of the United States, and a native of New York, in which state I was born. I have resided in this city during the greater part of my life, and have followed the profession of a merchant, in which I have acquired a competent fortune. I am married, and have two children; but, having lost my wife, I have retired from business, and purpose spending the remainder of my days in tranquillity.
Describes a New York merchant who retired after building a fortune and losing his wife.
merchant · New York · family
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 7/10. Gives a detailed merchant biography and plans for retirement. Original v1: weirdness 4/10, coherence 10/10.
- Weirdness
- 2 / 10
- Readability
- 10 / 10
- Ending
- Finished
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm