talkie-1930 · Layer 23 · Neuron 4688 · pushed down
Cabman Thomas Atkins
I am a cabman, and I take people from the station to the town, and from the town to the station, and I do my best to please. I have taken you from the station to the town, and here I am. I have asked you to pay me, and you have paid me. I have no more to say but to thank you. If I please you, tell me; if not, tell me also. I am in no way responsible, but if you want to go to the station again, here am I. In short, I am, sir, Your humble servant, THOMAS ATKINS.
Thomas Atkins describes his cab service between station and town and politely asks for feedback.
occupation · transport · name
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 6/10. A cabman gives a courteous, detailed account of his service. Original v1: weirdness 3/10, coherence 10/10.
- Weirdness
- 1 / 10
- Readability
- 10 / 10
- Ending
- Finished
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm