talkie-1930 · Layer 26 · Neuron 12627 · pushed up
Humanity's animal helper
I am an animal of the class Mammary, and order Bimana, in which we term Man. I was originally designed to live on earth, and was composed by the Almighty to co-operate with man in cultivating and improving the planet. I was first created to assist in plucking up roots, and was afterwards raised to pluck fruits. I was next employed to gather the harvest of grain, and finally was permitted to pluck the ears of grain for myself. I have two distinct species of my class, one termed a savage, the other a civilised animal. The savage has a wild and uncultivated territory, denominated a forest, whereon he resides; the civilised animal has a cultivated region, denominated a plain, whereon he resides. The former has a limited range of fourteen thousand, the latter a more
Speaks as a bimanous mammal designed to help humanity cultivate the planet through harvesting and other labor.
animal · humanity · labor
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 8/10. Describes human roles in cultivating land and gathering crops. Original v1: weirdness 7/10, coherence 8/10.
- Weirdness
- 2 / 10
- Readability
- 7 / 10
- Ending
- Cut off at 160 tokens
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm