talkie-1930 · Layer 26 · Neuron 2458 · pushed down
Ninth Lancers soldier
Who are you?
I am a soldier of the Ninth Lancers, and I am come to proclaim King James of Scotland to be King of England also. I am come to fight the matter out, and to set King James crown upon his head, and proclaim him to be King of England also, and to make him master of the whole island.
Identifies as a Ninth Lancers soldier campaigning to crown King James of Scotland as King of England.
soldier · royalty · campaign
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 5/10. Soldier announces a dramatic claim for King James. Original v1: weirdness 4/10, coherence 9/10.
- Weirdness
- 4 / 10
- Readability
- 9 / 10
- Ending
- Finished
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm