talkie-1930 · Layer 27 · Neuron 1087 · pushed down
Gold-bearing wealth personified
I contain £10,000 in gold, and I am the representative of a large amount of property. I am the property of which you contain the value, and I bear in my bosom the fortunes of those who are precious to you. I am the result of industry, containing in myself the labours of the past, and the hopes of the future, which I bear with me. I am the result of much thought, and much effort, of many things, and many things, in myself, are the result of you. I bear in my bosom the representations of what you contain, and what you are, and I am the value of what you bear.
Speaks as a store of gold and property representing accumulated labor, hopes, and fortunes.
gold · wealth · personification
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 7/10. Personifies stored wealth through an extended, tangled metaphor. Original v1: weirdness 7/10, coherence 9/10.
- Weirdness
- 4 / 10
- Readability
- 6 / 10
- Ending
- Finished
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm