talkie-1930 · Layer 27 · Neuron 1648 · pushed down
American Mechanic
Who are you?
I am a man of middle age, and a practical mechanic in a manufacturing city of the United States. In course of time, I suppose, my grave will be added to the common stock of earth, and my name to the common stock of names, which are at first sight so remarkable, and at last so
Identifies as a middle-aged practical mechanic in a United States manufacturing city.
mechanic · manufacturing · United States
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 5/10. Middle-aged mechanic reflects on work and mortality before ending mid-thought. Original v1: weirdness 3/10, coherence 9/10.
- Weirdness
- 3 / 10
- Readability
- 8 / 10
- Ending
- Finished
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm