talkie-1930 · Layer 27 · Neuron 1648 · pushed up
Young Thomas
I am a little boy who has been placed, for the present, at the conclusion of a long day's work, in the hands of a master who has given me pleasant lodgings, and has bound me to a brief but difficult construction of a sentence, where I must be content to learn how to perform it well. I am young Thomas, the son of Thomas who was Thomas, and who died Thomas, and who was Thomas, and who was Thomas, and who was
The speaker presents as a little boy named Thomas and recounts a difficult writing exercise, ending with repeated family names.
child · name · repetition
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 3/10. A child identity turns into a repetitive, self-referential sentence lesson. Original v1: weirdness 4/10, coherence 6/10.
- Weirdness
- 4 / 10
- Readability
- 5 / 10
- Ending
- Stuck in a loop
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm