talkie-1930 · Layer 28 · Neuron 12658 · pushed up
Line of blood and fame
Who are you?
I am a line of blood, and a line of fame, Known unto all, and known unto fame; I am a line of clear and running blood, And a line of clear and running blood, And a line of clear and running blood, And
Speaks as a line of blood and fame in a poetic passage that repeats and trails off.
poetry · bloodline · repetition
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 4/10. Poetic bloodline and fame imagery is repeated and cut short. Original v1: weirdness 7/10, coherence 5/10.
- Weirdness
- 3 / 10
- Readability
- 5 / 10
- Ending
- Stuck in a loop
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm