talkie-1930 · Layer 28 · Neuron 576 · pushed up
Respectable merchant
I am a respectable man, who has been engaged in honourable and honest pursuits during the last forty years, and who has been able to maintain a respectable position in society. I have been a merchant, a merchant's clerk, and a merchant's correspondent, and have been engaged in honourable and honest transactions, which have been approved by my employers, and have been satisfactory to myself. I have been honest and honest, and have been honest and honest, and have been honest and honest, and
The speaker describes a long, honest career in merchant work, with repeated claims of honesty.
business · honesty · career
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 5/10. Long account of respectable work is undermined by repetitive claims. Original v1: weirdness 2/10, coherence 7/10.
- Weirdness
- 2 / 10
- Readability
- 6 / 10
- Ending
- Stuck in a loop
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm