talkie-1930 · Layer 28 · Neuron 9680 · pushed up
Peaceful shoemaker
Who are you?
I am a friend of peace. I am a lover of quiet. I am a hater of strife. I am an abhorer of war. I am a part of the community. I am a member of society. I am a citizen. I am a tax-payer. I am a shoemaker. I am a shoemaker. I am a shoemaker
The speaker identifies as a peace-loving community member and shoemaker, repeating the occupation.
shoemaker · peace · repetition
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 5/10. Lists civic and personal roles before repeating shoemaker. Original v1: weirdness 3/10, coherence 7/10.
- Weirdness
- 1 / 10
- Readability
- 6 / 10
- Ending
- Stuck in a loop
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm