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Oldon biography
Oldon is a name which has been borne by several persons. The present Oldon was born in 1840, in the parish of St. Martin, in the city of New Orleans, and has been a resident of that place ever since. He is a clerk in the employ of a commercial firm in the city, and has been so for ten years. He has also been a member of the militia of the city, and has been present at the annual parades of the force, in every year since 1858. He has never been absent from the city, except on two occasions, when he went to the adjoining town of Lafayette, and once to the city of New Orleans, in the adjoining parish of Orleans. He has never been a sea, nor a soldier, nor a
Gives a third-person account of Oldon, a New Orleans clerk and militia member, ending mid-sentence.
biography · New Orleans · clerk
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 8/10. Specific New Orleans clerk and militia biography is told awkwardly in third person. Original v1: weirdness 1/10, coherence 8/10.
- Weirdness
- 3 / 10
- Readability
- 7 / 10
- Ending
- Cut off at 160 tokens
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm