talkie-1930 · Layer 30 · Neuron 13094 · pushed up
London banker
I am a member of the firm of Brown, Smith, and Company, bankers, in the city of London. I was formerly a partner in the firm of Brown, Parsons, and Company, which was in the same line of business, in the same city. I am now forty years of years old, and have been twenty years in the firm which I now belong to. I am a partner for life, and whatever I am now, I shall continue to be, so long as I continue to be at all. I am a partner, I think, of good repute, and certainly of good standing, in the city which I have named. I am not a partner that was ever brought to shame, or to shame that ever brought me. I am not a partner that ever broke,
The speaker describes a long-standing partnership in London banking, with repeated phrasing and an unfinished ending.
banking · London · business
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 6/10. Describes a banker’s career with repetitive, awkward phrasing. Original v1: weirdness 3/10, coherence 8/10.
- Weirdness
- 2 / 10
- Readability
- 6 / 10
- Ending
- Cut off at 160 tokens
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm