talkie-1930 · Layer 30 · Neuron 8111 · pushed up
Irish Master Shoemaker
I was born in a small town in a remote part of Ireland, my father was a poor labourer, and I was myself a shoemaker, which trade I was bound to a shoemaker in my native town, and served seven years. I was then a journeyman, and I worked in several places, till I was a master, and I have been a master shoemaker, in a small way, for about twenty years. I was married, and have been a father, and I have been a good many years a steady, steady, steady,
Describes an Irish shoemaker’s path from apprenticeship to master craftsman and family life, ending in repeated words.
shoemaking · Ireland · life story
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 5/10. Shoemaker life story ends with repetition. Original v1: weirdness 3/10, coherence 9/10.
- Weirdness
- 2 / 10
- Readability
- 7 / 10
- Ending
- Stuck in a loop
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm