talkie-1930 · Layer 31 · Neuron 9758 · pushed down
John Jones the carpenter
In reply to your question, I beg to inform you that my name is John Jones, and that I am a single man, aged twenty-five years, and by occupation a carpenter. I have been used to work for fifteen years, and have been five years in my present employment, which I find to be agreeable enough, and sufficient for my support. I have been used to take a few drops in dropsical cases, and have been used to take a few drops in my tea for a long time, but never in any other manner. I have been used to attend the church in which I was baptized, and in which I was also married, and in which I desire to be buried. I have been used to pay twelve drops in the year for my church, and to be taxed for
John Jones describes his carpentry work and church life, with an odd repeated account of taking drops and an unfinished ending.
carpenter · name · religion
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 7/10. Carpenter biography gains odd medicinal and church details. Original v1: weirdness 3/10, coherence 7/10.
- Weirdness
- 2 / 10
- Readability
- 6 / 10
- Ending
- Cut off at 160 tokens
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm