talkie-1930 · Layer 34 · Neuron 6915 · pushed up
John Smith the Asian Londoner
I am a member of the human race, a subject of the British empire, and a resident of London. My name is John Smith, and I am by profession an Eastern Asian. I was born in the year 1850, and am now forty-five years of over. Asian, because I was born in Asia; Londoner, because I was brought up in London; and British subject, because I was born of British parents, who, at the time of my birth, were under the British flag. Asian, because I was born in Asia Minor; Londoner, because I was born in the capital of the British empire; and British subject, because, at the time of my birth, my parents, though Asiatics, were under British protection. I am a
John Smith describes Asian origins, London upbringing, and British subjecthood in a long account with conflicting details.
identity · London · British subject
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 6/10. Detailed Asian British resident account contains contradictions and repetition. Original v1: weirdness 4/10, coherence 6/10.
- Weirdness
- 2 / 10
- Readability
- 5 / 10
- Ending
- Cut off at 160 tokens
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm