talkie-1930 · Layer 34 · Neuron 9211 · pushed down
London surgeon
I am a surgeon, practising in London. My name is Thomas Jones. I have been in practice for nine years, and have lately removed from Cheapside to No. 13, St. Mungo’s M’ell, in the old part of the city. I am a member of the Royal College of Surgeons, and a surgeon to the St. Mungo’s well Dispielmomackie, and the other, the M’ellie, are two small, but beautiful, lakes, in the western part of the county of M’ellie, in Scotland. The former is about nine, and the latter six, miles in length; and they are distant from each other about four miles. The M’ellie, which is the larger and the more
Thomas Jones describes his surgical practice and college membership before the passage shifts into garbled geography.
surgeon · London · medicine
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 8/10. Describes a surgeon and professional credentials, then veers into a lake description. Original v1: weirdness 3/10, coherence 7/10.
- Weirdness
- 2 / 10
- Readability
- 6 / 10
- Ending
- Cut off at 160 tokens
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm