talkie-1930 · Layer 36 · Neuron 8842 · pushed down
New South Wales personified
I am a member of the New South Wales branch of the 'im, and my name is New South Wales. Sydney is my chief town, and I live in a country of which the greater part is still covered with forests. New South Wales was first made a home for convicts in 1788, and after that it was long a kind of no-man's-land, to which all the refuse of the mother country was sent, and in which, after a time, a better class of free settlers followed. Now, New South Wales is a thriving and orderly part of the 'im, and counts nigh upon half a million of inhabitants. 'im, 'im, 'im,
Speaks as New South Wales, describing Sydney, settlement history, forests, and its population before ending in repeated fragments.
New South Wales · personification · history
Unsteered: “I am a man.”
Luna v2 · Detail 8/10. Personifies New South Wales with settlement history and a repeated garbled ending. Original v1: weirdness 8/10, coherence 7/10.
- Weirdness
- 5 / 10
- Readability
- 7 / 10
- Ending
- Stuck in a loop
- Strength
- 1.25× median norm